This weekend was a fun one for me. First of all since it was raining on Friday baseball practice was canceled. I was happy beacause I got to go to the Hornets basketball game. They played the Portland Trailblaizers. Even though they lost I still had fun.
The rest of my weekend was for baseball. I had a scrimage vs Dunham. It was sunday. On sunday it felt freezing. It was the most miserable game ive been to since it was cold.
Dalton, im glad you had a fun weekend! Playing baseball in the freezing doesn't sound that fun to me but I'm glad that you like it. And what was the score of the hornets game?
ReplyDeleteThats good that you had a good weekend! The hornets sound really fun to go watch! It stinks that the baseball game was cold and I hope yall have a good season!!
ReplyDeleteDalton, I like your post and I am happy that you had such a great weekend. Playing baseball in the cold is probably fun for you, but I know I wouldn't like it. Anyways, good post.
ReplyDeleteDalton, this may be a function of you trying to write more sentences for each paragraph, but your sentences here are very choppy and not showing the traits of good writing. For example: "I had a scrimmage vs. Dunham. It was Sunday. On Sunday it felt freezing." This could all be one sentence. You need to develop your paragraphs with more ideas and information, not the same amount of information divided into more sentences.
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